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1. Topic paragraph
2. Supporting paragraph 1
3. Supporting paragraph 2
4. Supporting paragraph 3
5. conclusion paragraph
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3. Supporting paragraph 2
4. Supporting paragraph 3
5. conclusion paragraph
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ll., make a sustantial effort on improving their well-being. The issue on the rights of the animals can’t be solved by abolishing zoos. In reality, it is impossible to abolish all the zoos and release all the animals back to the wild; therefore abolishing the zoos is not a good solution. In my opinion, a proper regulation zoos must become the facilities which care and protect the animals there.
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